jump to navigation

Selected Short Fiction

These are examples of my more “immature” writing I suppose.
Full Moon Night Trip
One Soldier
The Cruise


1. aredden - June 27, 2006

I read “By the Time the Streetlight Comes On” and thought I would give you some feedback. First I would like to say THANK YOU. Thank you for sharing your writing. I enjoyed reading it. I like that you use The Old Man instead of a name or more endearing title for the dad. I wonder though, what would happen if you gave at least one of the children (probably the main character) a name? Or, what would happen if the story were told from a first person point of view? I like it. The beginning hooked me. These are just a few ideas I had as I read. Thank you again for sharing your writing.

2. dr. gonzo - June 28, 2006

Thank you for your input and thanks for reading. :)

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: